1.Narrowed topic:credit cards.
controlling idea:if you have credit card .
topic sentence:using credit card is more better than carrying cash.
2.A persin you like
controlling idea:being in love .
topic sentence:if you love someone and comfortable to him you have to tell him about your love.
3.narrowed topic:control yourself.
controlling idea:being in control.
topic sentence:control yourself gives you the seccess in your life.
practice 6
paragraph1:Pet sometime can save the humans life.
paragraph2:The adventage of digtal photography.
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Not 'more better' just better (in sentence 1). You also have 'person' spelled incorrectly! Also, recheck your answer for number 6!
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